Reviews Received
THat's a sweet story! It looks like it's from the perspective of a sheltered kid. But, if not, then it's still pretty sweet! Setting it up as either a story for a devilish world, or one of sheltered children. Who knows? (Well, of course you do, I mean, you wrote this)
But, I love it! Keep writing! We will keep reading!
Oh my god yeah. Happens all the time. It's soo frustrating. Nice poem-story! It's a bit of both in my opinion, in yours, I might be wrong. Anyways, its very representative of the truth. Nice one! Keep writing! We will keep reading!