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United States • 19 y/o • Female
"Be yourself, because an original is worth more than a copy"
First line you said there ws insead of there was.
<3 luv it!
The one thing that I never hope to see, is a GORY love story
Awww this was such an adorable story, I loved it so much. Great job!
In the first line I think you meant to say Keep out all of instead of keep out of all.
Very nice poetry. I love how nicely it flows. ðŸ‘
6th line you put an extra d on convinced. Nice, I really like it.