Matt Decker

So sweet and well put together! I love everything about it! Great job!

Awesome

Numbed! Totally numbed by the creativity of expression and the sheer clarity of thought.
Matt Decker, you did it again

I enjoyed reading this. i have never seen anyone rhyme seed so much and make it interesting. great job!
also were you thinking of Dr. Suess when you wrote this? it just has that sort of a feel to it.

It's very hard to pull off something of this style - all the perspective changes, time jumping, mediums etc. I think you did really well! Especially as a short story, it can be a challenge to compact so many ideas into such a... scale.

Love how its laid out . Its like your there !
You can't wait to see what happenes next by the first 2 paragraphs .Great job Matt ,