Matt Decker

Definitely something I'd want to read to children at night. Well done and keep up the great poetry.

Interesting twist at the end. Put things in deeper perspective.

Beautifully crafted

I enjoyed reading this. i have never seen anyone rhyme seed so much and make it interesting. great job!
also were you thinking of Dr. Suess when you wrote this? it just has that sort of a feel to it.

Numbed! Totally numbed by the creativity of expression and the sheer clarity of thought.
Matt Decker, you did it again

This was brilliant. I do love the words play and story it told.

dragons and magic are sure someone else attention in mode

Awesome