TheForgotten

It's actually a rather good point that you bring up, I hadn't even thought about it before reading this.

This poem expresses deep thought on a very sensitive subject, and I liked it a lot. I hope you continue to write amazing poems like this!

Personally I felt the story was absolutely amazing. The idea was great, and the characters were fantastic, there's a lot of detail to each of their personalities. Good job! I look forward to future stories.

This peice is very honest, and relatable

I really enjoyed this poem. I hope to see more of your peices in the future.