TheForgotten

The story was well written and the story keeps the reader's attention well. A job well done. And thank you for your service.

I really loved the idea for this story. I like how instead of the "creatures under our beds" being the monsters a human is. One little flaw I noticed was it was somewhat hard to identify which creature was which (I may just have a hard time keeping up though), but overall I really liked it. I hope to see more!

I really liked this particular piece. The story line was cute, and I know I'll probably sound silly but reading this just made me happy. Very well done.

I really liked this story. I love how you incorporated well known characters from a vast amount of children's stories into an investigation to figure out what really happened to Humpty. Brilliant!

I really liked this, it flows well. Good job! :)

You did an amazing job at pulling the reader into the scene, it was lovely :)

This poem expresses deep thought on a very sensitive subject, and I liked it a lot. I hope you continue to write amazing poems like this!

Personally I felt the story was absolutely amazing. The idea was great, and the characters were fantastic, there's a lot of detail to each of their personalities. Good job! I look forward to future stories.