TheForgotten

I thought the story was rather good in my opinion. I liked the theme of this piece, you had very good description. I don't think it got to a point of unbearable 'preachy' tone. Keep writing, I like the direction this story is going!

I've been trying to keep up with this series in my small amounts of free time lately, I'd like to see where this could head.

While definitely interesting I found this story to be a rather good angle on a normal action.

I liked this poem and how it was put together. Good job, as always.

I've been keeping track of this series and the ending of this scene just blew my mind. I can't wait for the next one!

Whoa. This story is great. I really would like to see where this is going to lead. Great work!

The story itself was good, and cute. I noticed a few errors in the story though, which can be easily fixed. Very cute little story!

I love the idea of this story. It's unique and I believe it had a message. Just a side not but in pativular parts the story would get a little sloppy. Otherwise I really liked this peice.