TheForgotten

A lovely poem about heart break

I thought this piece was beautifully written. It's a lovely poem

Wow. Topic was great and the execution of it was fantastic. Lovely work.

I tend to like short and brisk stories such as this one, they tell you a lot without saying much.

Personally I believe that every story, or poem is meant to make the audience feel something, whether it be happiness, or sadness. And this story seemed to give off a lot of emotion, it makes the reader feel something, which is what I think the whole point is. Good job