Optimism101

And so the romance-in-a-literal-almost-hellscape-world-filled-with-people-that-can-literaly-murder-you-instantly begins.

Oof. Sorry, old habit. ANYWAYS, It's a nice story. It makes a character and a world in which unknown details are filled in by the original song. Also, the OP is kinda a jerk. He was getting married to someone and left her. It seems like an endless cycle, with the fiance being the new Op. Otherwise, it's a nicely written story with much emotions. Keep writing! We will keep reading.

It's some good fluff. The flashback is in amazing detail, and I'm not sure if it was a dream or the past. ()-() It's a nice story. Not sure who lit the fire though. Mom, daughter, or son. Who knows? Keep writing! We will keep reading!

Wow. That is an awesome poem! Well, awesome in working, not in content, because the content is kinda sad and everything but... you know what, I'll stop. It is very well written, and flows very easily. Keep writing! We will keep reading!

OOOoooOOOooOOOOoOOOooooOO! (segment preferably read with as much teen voice cracks as possible) I wonder where he came from! Well, that's obvious. I can't wait to hear more! Oh! Please make more, cliffhangers and un-ended stories suuuuuuck. Anyways, Keep writing! We will keep reading

Some more plz! Love your work!

Op. It's a nice story, poem? I think it could easily work on both levels. Anyways, I like it! I can't truly relate, but I know people who live this sort of life, and the redemption is great, but beforehand it is absolutely terrible. I hope the lifestyle does not pertain to your profile name :P. Anyways(again), I think it was nicely written, and overall, I liked it! Definitely can change someone's thought process. Well, I think that's enough of a review for now. Keep writing! We will keep reading!

GRRRR! Still there are questions unanswered! You are an attention grabber for sure. At least one more part. One more question answered.