Optimism101

You know, I was curious why you weren't active
Then I thought you were working on something
I was right
This is beautiful
Very energetic, and sweet
You did a good job
and yes loveling11 is a spammer, i got like 5 separate messages from them and finally blocked them

It's interesting. I see a vigilante scenario where you have someone just going against those that abuse. However, that quickly changes at the end. It's very good, and the writing is interesting. The poems seem to get better as the story goes on, with the last one being the best. This might be a literary device, or practice, but overall I enjoyed it. Keep writing! We will keep reading!

I like it. you have an interesting inn, with an interesting story. I personally hope that we get to see more of the inn, however, you are more likely to talk about the king's story, and that will be interesting too. Can't wait for the next part! Keep writing! We will keep reading!

That's a good you. Not just a nice autobiography piece, but it helps for empowerment too!
Good job!

Oh damn

Ouch

I truly hope this isn't based off of past or present circumstances. However, it is a good piece. Very good. Nice rhyming work. Some of those words could be improved for a better rhyme, but otherwise it is very nice.

"Where are you now?" It's not a bad poem. It is a sort of chaotic, that connects to someones fear of losing them. Maybe one day you should try happy poems. I bet they would uplift more people than ever were down.

It's a good one! I like it, but then again, I kinda like everything. Guess that's just kinda how this works :P.