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Thomas Ray

ThomastheRay is from US United States • 22 y/o • Male

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JedSlight
JedSlight reviewed Sirel

I'm kind of confused about when and who and such, but this is good. I like the dark feeling it has.

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Annielol399
Annielol399 reviewed They Always Do Go Bad

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MistyJJP
Amber Jones reviewed The Dark

Do you plan to make this more of a suspense Fantasy? I feel like when someone is writing a suspense or a more "dark" story the descriptions that weave themselves into the story are key.

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Dari-the-bookworm
Dari Poulson reviewed The Dark

I really liked this one and I vote that you continue it!

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LeCat127
LeCat127 reviewed The Dark

This made me think of a friend of mine, for some reason.
I noticed a lot of people asking for more of this, and I don't know if you have written more or not, but I think it's actually quite good as a standalone, just a snippet of story that is what it is.

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angelacantu19
ellie reviewed Letters Across the Sea

I really liked this, and kinda hated it but only because it was sad yet loved it!

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Dari-the-bookworm
Dari Poulson reviewed Letters Across the Sea

I love this. It was so creative and clever!

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ASwordslasher
ASwordslasher reviewed Letters Across the Sea

okay it's really sad, specially the end. It feels like he's dead.
awesome; you derive great depths from simple words.
Keep it up

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