United States • 22 y/o • MaleReviews Received
One hundred percent felt that "you definitely know my sister" part. I like the mood of this story, the simplicity of it that explores the passing of strangers in a person's life.
I was surprised by how much I enjoyed this. I loved the characters and the way you wrote the whole scene. It was quite delightful!
Ah, yes, secrets. This describes them well. Great work.
Sometimes keeping someone secret can be a burden. I had a friend that I liked a lot but found out a dark secret they didn’t know I knew. Till this day I’ve kept it a secret because I didn’t want to hurt their feelings for knowing it. Was I wrong to do so?
I like the way you tease at there being more to the story than what you show without making it too confusing to keep up with.
this rhyming! it spoke right to my heart. keep at it! i can't wait to see what you write next
Ooh, I actually really like this! It sounds like it should be a song.
This story sounds like the beginning of something brilliant! I was a little confused as it progressed, but idrc, it'll probably make more sense later on. I can't wait to read more!
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