Reviews Received
That was different. It definitely offers a different perspective on friends, and I feel like it's very relatable. Good job.
I really love the idea and how you executed it. Description was lovely and really drew the reader in. The only problem I saw was in the "light" it was difficult to keep up without any previous context to the story. A prologue could help with that. Overall I thought it was very good and I hope you continue it!