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That was great. I found it rather comical at the end. Well done.
Wow! 😠Amazing I really loved the story. This was the best story that I have ever heard you are a great writer.
Very clever! Nothing like getting one over on the ghost.
Oooo chills. I was not expecting that. The development of the story and description you used was really amazing!
the suspense and the build up was really good! you should write more
That was awesome. A great twist at the end. Well done.
An exercise Agatha Christie would smile at! The little story about a murder-suspect & Lottie includes a good writing flow, dialogue giving personality to the characters, and insights into ``the mind of a murderer´´.
Yo, this is fantastic writing!
I've never experienced these types of events, but from what I hear there is always, as you have written, 'the Don'. Someone who knows it all and sits in their ivory tower of some sort.
The passage when Don articulated the wine saying, "full bodied...just about acceptable." I thought the same thing being, "what the hell does 'full body' mean?"
Some of those foods your mentioned, just the names of them sound astonishing to taste buds.
The flow was decent, variety of vocabulary, great aspect of comedy and truth- just a notable read.