United States • 73 y/o • MaleReviews Received
A humorous take on awkward social situations. Clad in mobster-flair and godfather kinda crime fiction comedy.
``Now, I have so much not to review on masterpieces making me pale in envy?´´ ;-) A little overstatement.
Well played. Thank you for some moments of fun.
That was a great story. Well done.
Wonderful! 😢 my friend it was really a lovely up the good job men I was amazing you are a star🌟
I enjoyed this story. It soon became clear how it would end, but you evoke the narrator and the animals very well. Most pet owners will relate to it.
The part about the cheif and his morning coffee was funny.
I like your descriptions of the characters and of the setting. If I'd written it I'd have tried to prepare for the twist without giving too much away.
I'd mention a small ball lying in a corner of the sitting room. Voss could think the old lady has a granchild who called and forgot to take the ball home. Then at the end she says "Arthur's not my husband, he's my cat. That's his ball in the corner." That prepares for the twist without making it too obvious.
The captain stealing Vosse's thunder rings true.
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