United States • 73 y/o • MaleReviews Received
the suspense and the build up was really good! you should write more
That was awesome. A great twist at the end. Well done.
An exercise Agatha Christie would smile at! The little story about a murder-suspect & Lottie includes a good writing flow, dialogue giving personality to the characters, and insights into ``the mind of a murderer´´.
Yo, this is fantastic writing!
I've never experienced these types of events, but from what I hear there is always, as you have written, 'the Don'. Someone who knows it all and sits in their ivory tower of some sort.
The passage when Don articulated the wine saying, "full bodied...just about acceptable." I thought the same thing being, "what the hell does 'full body' mean?"
Some of those foods your mentioned, just the names of them sound astonishing to taste buds.
The flow was decent, variety of vocabulary, great aspect of comedy and truth- just a notable read.
A humorous take on awkward social situations. Clad in mobster-flair and godfather kinda crime fiction comedy.
``Now, I have so much not to review on masterpieces making me pale in envy?´´ ;-) A little overstatement.
Well played. Thank you for some moments of fun.
That was a great story. Well done.