United States • 73 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Oooo chills. I was not expecting that. The development of the story and description you used was really amazing!
the suspense and the build up was really good! you should write more
Wow! 😠Amazing I really loved the story. This was the best story that I have ever heard you are a great writer.
Wonderful! 😢 my friend it was really a lovely up the good job men I was amazing you are a star🌟
Yo, this is fantastic writing!
I've never experienced these types of events, but from what I hear there is always, as you have written, 'the Don'. Someone who knows it all and sits in their ivory tower of some sort.
The passage when Don articulated the wine saying, "full bodied...just about acceptable." I thought the same thing being, "what the hell does 'full body' mean?"
Some of those foods your mentioned, just the names of them sound astonishing to taste buds.
The flow was decent, variety of vocabulary, great aspect of comedy and truth- just a notable read.
I enjoyed this story. It soon became clear how it would end, but you evoke the narrator and the animals very well. Most pet owners will relate to it.
An exercise Agatha Christie would smile at! The little story about a murder-suspect & Lottie includes a good writing flow, dialogue giving personality to the characters, and insights into ``the mind of a murderer´´.
Well played. Thank you for some moments of fun.