welshdreamer42

Sometimes a hug is just about all you need to set your world to rights. I relate to your poem strongly - as will many others I'm sure :-)

Wonderfully evocative! I love the way you build up the tension and feeling of paranoia in your principal character. This is terrific writing.

My only slight 'criticism' is to question whether your story is suitable for readers as young as twelve? Other than that, superb!

Whoa...I so did not see that coming. More, please!