United States • 56 y/oReviews Received
Very well written story with a nail biting element! Often times these sorts of things turn out horribly and this is an important lesson showing the dangers of being naive.
A very comedic story with a very serious undertone and an important lesson we can all take from this. The humorous style and paragraph structure is built perfectly for pulling one in to the story. If only the story was longer, because I was hooked fast and could have read on and on!