Xavion

This was very well written. it was a very good story line as well. Keep it up!!

This is really good and really well written. You could feel the emotions of the main character. Great job

I rly love this. Its the truth. Especially ur last line. "Just because it's suicide doesn't mean there's not a killer ".
That's the truth. Noone ever just commits. There's always a reason. And most people that commit or try to commit don't do it cause they want to die persay, they do it cause they can't handoe the pain of living anymore and that seems like the only option.
U captured the feelings of it very well in this short poem. U r extremly talented keep it up:)