An Old Croaked House, California Part 1 Reviews
I like it, but use more descriptive words to make it more interesting, but other than that it really good.
Sansid I have just started writing, dude! I'll definitely improve!!! Thanks for the suggestion!
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Kat Dickens I wasn't trying to be mean, I really like the story, I was just trying to help. If I seemed rude, I'm sorry, I wasn't trying to be.
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Sansid No... no no It is fine! You weren't rude! I swear, I know u were trying to help n I appreciate that! Thank you so much for helping me! I have taken as a suggestion from a friend.
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Kat Dickens oh okay, good, just making sure that there is no misunderstanding. cause we all know that those can end badly ;)
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