An amazing story. It would make a classic Sherlock Holmes mystery. Well done.

Omg, me and my best friend was reading this together, and was freaked out, we even said if we saw a doll on the road we’d be gone as fast as we can, keep up the work! I love this story!!

In paragraph seven, would it be better if the girl was hugging her doll for comfort rather than playing with it? That seems more plausible given that she's just suffered a terrible loss. A poor family might well have to keep working through the shock but they'd be feeling upset, just having to carry on in spite of that. Keep practising and you'll master that.

It was really scary... I know it is just a legend but still...
You freaked me out. It was kinda like Annabel but still

Gr8 job!

XOXO,
Sansid

Chills... I'm gonna have a hard time sleeping tonight. Nice job! :)