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My Fan-Fic (Part 3) Reviews

2 reviews have given an average rating of 4 out of 5 Stars
-Lynnyan-
Lyn gave a rating of 4

Very entertaining! You have a few grammatical errors, such as using commas when necessary. If you used the names of the characters a bit more when they talked, it would make it more clear as to who is speaking. I think that's about it. You're really talented!

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Sparkly_Alicorn
Poet gave a rating of 4

Very very intrigued. Can’t wait to see what happens next to this band of friends

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