I really loved the word choice as well as the flow of the story. It choked me up a bit at the end there. Really well done.

this is good, but hard to relate to for me. but i like it very much.

Well versed piece that flows with pain of another

Thanks to your way of writing, I didn't have trouble immersing in this poem. This depiction can be a sad reality for some. Good job on bringing the point forward.

That was really good...... Its hard to try to fit in with the people. You feel you have to be accepted. But we dont if more people could appreciate the ability for someone to just be them self! Very VERY good.

I can really relate to this poem.... This poem has touched my heart