Accurately captures the nature of girl bullies and the depth with which it cuts.

i really like it because its true and that always happens to someone and its the true on how people think about others thank you for making me understand how words can really hurt someone

I understand what a person would go through since I have and still am getting bullied.
The first time it has ever started was in second grade and it has never stopped ever since.
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I would suggest using stronger word choice, but since the people you're writing about are shallow, it makes a good parallel to keep it more simple. Good story about a common issue that isn't spoken of enough.

It was good, I personally really feel the pain even just reading it makes me feel bad.

With all my heart I loathe people that do it to others like that. It is just so.... ugh. Anyways like the way you came about with this. It is excellent put out and on point.