take flight (part three) Reviews
I have one tip. Everli seemed very upset about the notebook being read, but when she found out who it was that did that, she rolled her eyes and moved on. I want to really get into her head, to see how she reacts and why. That being said, I'm super excited to see how this friendship will grow. You've given me a major boost of inspiration. If I found a book this captivating at say, a library, I would definitely check it out.
I'm super excited for the next part.
Also, I truly hope no one is too sad about the way this story will end. It’s...not necessarily happy.
The ending doesn't have to be happy, but it shouldn't be sad for the sake of being sad.