The Dark Reviews
8 reviews have given an average rating of 4.6 out of 5 Stars
This made me think of a friend of mine, for some reason.
I noticed a lot of people asking for more of this, and I don't know if you have written more or not, but I think it's actually quite good as a standalone, just a snippet of story that is what it is.
brilliant start. Please write some more....
Hi there! I just wanted to say, regardless of whether you continue this story (and I haven't yet checked, but I will), this piece is beautiful and I love your characterisation of the dark. Word choice is perfect also!
Thomas Ray Yeah, there's not more. It's also interesting to notice and remember how dependant I was on feedback when I wrote this. I still love it, but I feel like I've taken a major step forward in that aspect of myself.
Thanks for reading it! I'll be sure to read some of your stuff. (If you have any. I haven't checked)
Thanks for reading it! I'll be sure to read some of your stuff. (If you have any. I haven't checked)
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Continue it it's gonna be epic
I really liked this one and I vote that you continue it!
scorp Definitely. I can't wait to see if Eren will fight or not!
Really good word choice pal. It was a great read, especially how you built up the story throughout very well. I really liked it.
Thomas Ray Thanks!
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I will write similar things, though. I like this kind of thing.