The Dark Reviews
8 reviews have given an average rating of 4.6 out of 5 Stars
Do you plan to make this more of a suspense Fantasy? I feel like when someone is writing a suspense or a more "dark" story the descriptions that weave themselves into the story are key.
Amber Jones But as far as your story structure and the overall idea goes, I think it's very creative.
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Thomas Ray I'm not really sure what I plan to do with it, but yeah, it would be more suspenseful than most of my other things. I have a vague idea of where it's going, but it's kinda weird--not in a bad way--and very strange.
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hi, your choice of words is good and the way you built up the story was amazing. I like your story. waiting for your continuation.
Thomas Ray Thank you! I'll try not to ruin it with the rest.
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