The Dark Reviews
brilliant start. Please write some more....
Hi there! I just wanted to say, regardless of whether you continue this story (and I haven't yet checked, but I will), this piece is beautiful and I love your characterisation of the dark. Word choice is perfect also!
Thanks for reading it! I'll be sure to read some of your stuff. (If you have any. I haven't checked)
I really liked this one and I vote that you continue it!
Really good word choice pal. It was a great read, especially how you built up the story throughout very well. I really liked it.
Do you plan to make this more of a suspense Fantasy? I feel like when someone is writing a suspense or a more "dark" story the descriptions that weave themselves into the story are key.