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this is fantastic, and i cant wait to read part 2. on my way now!

Please write part two. Now. ÒwÓ

Jesus, I swear you know how to write a good no a fantastic read, I love it and I hope you plan to make more parts and not just leave it at that cliffhanger, because I want to know what their reactions will be and what happens in those 8 days and 56 minutes, how will he decide to spend them... or..... finds a way to cheat the system! But as always props to you mate.