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Until the Sky Comes Crashing Down Reviews

3 reviews have given an average rating of 3.7 out of 5 Stars
starry-starry-night
starry-starry-night gave a rating of 1

author is homophobe and transphobe

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Darkness
hvdiyya gave a rating of 5

Did you say that ur not the best at poems- Lyn don't make me laugh. this is better than all my poems combined. you dont mind if i steal it- JKK

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Lyn
Lyn You wouldn't dare-
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Lyn
Lyn and thank you so much for the support, it means a lot!
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kiraafinifrock
Kiraa gave a rating of 5

I didn't find this cringey or cheesy at all- this is actually well done, especially for your age. I enjoy how you separated the sections, steered away from just repeating the title too many times, but I especially enjoy the first two lines. Very captivating intro and heartfelt without exposing a vein. Distant but still genuine. Thanks for sharing this!

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Lyn
Lyn Thank you so much! That means a lot, it really does. I'm so glad you enjoyed.
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