sad.........but beautiful

I love this!! so touching and emotional! great job, definitely one of my favorites!

This is a good story. Your structure was intriguing and I really appreciated your longing for the stars, as I have a similar one for nature. Has a haunting tone that I also liked. Good job

I love it. It's amazing. I can relate... Waking up and wondering why? Why, if no one cares. Why. It takes so much anger and self hate to bring a blade to your own skin and cut. It sucks I have that much.

I know this feeling... I have felt it many times. Stay up late at night wondering if I might have the courage the next day to get up and do something other than lie there, slowly wasting away. I never ever had anyone to pick me up off the floor and hold me, stroking my hair back, telling me that I'll be okay. I love your poem. Just know that I am here.