Lyn

First of all, that painter needs therapy.
Second, when writing dialogue, create a new paragraph for each new person speaking.
and lastly, try not to switch point-of-view in the middle of the story. It gets confusing for the reader.

I laughed so hard I couldn’t breathe, omg!

This was hilarious, I loved it!

This really lifted my spirits! I hope you're alright, though. If you need anyone to talk to, I'm here for you. Whatever you may be going through, I hope you can stick with this person you speak of and push through. Keep going, the world needs you, too!

This was great! I loved how you used quotations in the poem as well. I didn't find anything that really stuck out in a bad sense, but then again I'm not very poetic...

I absolutely love your stories! Again, a little pointer...
When you use quotations, make a new paragraph for each person speaking.
other than that, it was absolutely wonderful!

That was incredible! I really felt the emotion and I feel so happy for them! I can't stop using exclamation points! That was truly worth reading!

This was amazing! I loved the emotion you put into this. Keep writing like this and you could be a published author! Also, when you write in quotations, start with a capital, even if it's not the beginning of the sentence. Here's an example:
Leo looked off into the distance and whispered, "It's all my fault..."
I hope this helps you in the future! And if you just forgot to, I apologize.