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-Lynnyan- is from US United States • 16 y/o • Female

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Perfectly by AaronTheRocker

This is beautiful! I fully agree. You shouldn't judge people so easily. I also think that you should get to know a person before judging them, such as the girl you spoke of. She might be going through something that you didn't know about. Just try to give people the benefit of the doubt, it might just change your perspective on everything!

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Crying Alone in the Darkness by kayleeistwix

I really enjoyed this story! I have to admit, I expected that he was crushing on Jessica. But the part where he was stabbed caught me off-guard! There a few grammatical errors, but those are easily fixed. All in all, it was a great read! Keep writing :)

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How Long by Sepperince

This really spoke to my heart. You did a great job putting these emotions into words. I can't wait to read more of your works!

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Surrounding Stars by Blitzø

This was amazing! I loved the emotion you put into this. Keep writing like this and you could be a published author! Also, when you write in quotations, start with a capital, even if it's not the beginning of the sentence. Here's an example:
Leo looked off into the distance and whispered, "It's all my fault..."
I hope this helps you in the future! And if you just forgot to, I apologize.

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I Will Still Love You by hazel basil

Omg this hits way too close to home :(
But it’s nice to know that I’m not the only one struggling with these emotions. Good job writing them down like this, it’s really good!!

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Wedding Day by LeaSheryn

That was incredible! I really felt the emotion and I feel so happy for them! I can't stop using exclamation points! That was truly worth reading!

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Murder Operation by Blitzø

I absolutely love your stories! Again, a little pointer...
When you use quotations, make a new paragraph for each person speaking.
other than that, it was absolutely wonderful!

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Dead Promises by Blitzø

This was great! I loved how you used quotations in the poem as well. I didn't find anything that really stuck out in a bad sense, but then again I'm not very poetic...

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