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This was hilarious, I loved it!
In paragraph 29, I suggest fixing the quotations. I stopped reading right there to let you know, but I love the story so far!
That was incredible! I really felt the emotion and I feel so happy for them! I can't stop using exclamation points! That was truly worth reading!
This was amazing! I loved the emotion you put into this. Keep writing like this and you could be a published author! Also, when you write in quotations, start with a capital, even if it's not the beginning of the sentence. Here's an example:
Leo looked off into the distance and whispered, "It's all my fault..."
I hope this helps you in the future! And if you just forgot to, I apologize.
This was great! I loved how you used quotations in the poem as well. I didn't find anything that really stuck out in a bad sense, but then again I'm not very poetic...
I absolutely love your stories! Again, a little pointer...
When you use quotations, make a new paragraph for each person speaking.
other than that, it was absolutely wonderful!