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Great job! I know exactly what you wrote this for >:3 And, no, poems don't always have to rhyme.
My heart-
Great job, I love your technique!
This is really sweet, and I know that whoever your talking about will enjoy reading this. Good luck with 'em! ;)
Wow, incredible! Absolutely worth the wait! I like how you made it a bit longer and added more suspense, it really influenced my reaction. Great job!
Wow, this was perfect. I like how you left off right there when he sees her again. But, I thought he had tried to, y'know, follow in Everli's footsteps. What exactly happened is what I wanna know. Great writing, tho!
That's pretty funny! I think we all feel that way nowadays. You've brought a smile to my face, so thank you!
Hey, it's me again! In paragraph 5, you have a quotation mark at the beginning where it's not needed. I personally don't have intrusive thoughts, so I can't say that this has affected me in any way, but I know that this can help others, which is great! Keep writing!
Interesting. I wonder what number 7 is referring to. You did a great job! I love how you wrote in lowercase, it gives the writing a more nonchalant feel, even if it's about death.