Lyn

My friend and I grew apart, too. This is a very emotional story for me. Thank you for sharing it <3

Please continue! You did a great job! I love how you even included George's colorblind point of view. A great story, I can't wait for more of this.

I'll be waiting, no need to worry.
Great job with the rhyming, it was very smooth. And somehow the poem sounded like sweet buttermilk??? I don't know if I'm just really tired, but that's how it felt. Keep writing, you're very talented.

A beautiful display of friendship! Great job :D

This was incredible! The way you described the train made me believe I could hear it as clear as Beth could. Brilliant job. I can't wait to read more!

This is gorgeous <3 I am so impressed, you are just as good as I thought you'd be. Maybe even more, actually. You deserve more recognition for this. It's incredible!

Another incredible story. I love the way you explained how love felt to the fire fairy. I certainly am intrigued by this. If you could write another story about this world, I will be sure to check it out! Great job, I really enjoyed this. There was a line of dialogue you forgot to close, though. But other than that, it was amazing!

I think you did a great job! It really conveys the message well. Keep writing, you're very talented.