Lyn

Please continue! You did a great job! I love how you even included George's colorblind point of view. A great story, I can't wait for more of this.

My friend and I grew apart, too. This is a very emotional story for me. Thank you for sharing it <3

I'll be waiting, no need to worry.
Great job with the rhyming, it was very smooth. And somehow the poem sounded like sweet buttermilk??? I don't know if I'm just really tired, but that's how it felt. Keep writing, you're very talented.

A beautiful display of friendship! Great job :D

This was incredible! The way you described the train made me believe I could hear it as clear as Beth could. Brilliant job. I can't wait to read more!

This is gorgeous <3 I am so impressed, you are just as good as I thought you'd be. Maybe even more, actually. You deserve more recognition for this. It's incredible!

Another incredible story. I love the way you explained how love felt to the fire fairy. I certainly am intrigued by this. If you could write another story about this world, I will be sure to check it out! Great job, I really enjoyed this. There was a line of dialogue you forgot to close, though. But other than that, it was amazing!

The tragedy of losing someone dear to you. You tied this to a close very well, good job! It's like a half-story-half-poem and I like that. I do have to say that it's kind of hard to keep up with, though. The repetition of "who are you?" made me want to skip every other line. Maybe consider making the other lines a bit longer or taking out some of those "who are you" 's. Or maybe I'm just really lazy, who's to say? Other than that, it was really good!