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Sweet!

omgg i LOVED how you like boldened the words and put the commas in there it really gave it a sort of.. beat.

that so good

that soo good

Really great style! Keep writing

I love this series so far!!! Keep up the amazing work! :D

I like the way you spell out 'I'm fine' with initial letters of negative emotions.

cool, dark for a 12 yr old, but cool