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i like it
You're drawing readers in by describing their sadness but not yet explaining the reason for it. With 'Anyway Back' there should be a lower case 'b' in 'back,' but more practice should fix issues like that.
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Hi, My names Leilanie and I hope you like what I write. btw the site that I put there isn't mine but I guess I just want people to see it...