United States • 23 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Woah, this is incredible. I’ll admit, I’m scared to talk full-on about my beliefs with my friends. I also know that I label a lot :(
You caught me off guard when you admitted that you had lied about all of the beliefs you had written down. I was ready to accept you and say, “It’s okay for us to have different view points.†But it was all fake! I love the way you tied it all together. Great job!
Way to truly speak your mind here! Sometimes that's hard to do in this world when people shut down your opinion without really giving you a chance to express them. Good job.
i love this
This was really neat :) I like how you made the storytelling into like a staircase. One step at a time with each conflicting occurrence, it all came together.
I think abortions are okay, but that doesn't mean this is bad writing because it is pretty good and I'm glad you put your opinion/belief out there for everyone to see. Not exactly the easiest thing to do.
It's brave to share this opinion. Looking at the reviews is kind of funny because most of them are people agreeing with you, and those reviews are downvoted to -4 or some such number, and it just amuses me that they're completely silent but still feel spiteful and angry enough to do that.
Guys, if you're reading this, just learn to deal with other people having and expressing opinions that are different than yours.
The point of art is to cause controversy by bringing an issue to light- whether it be an internal conflict, a political issue, a human rights issue or anything else. Thank you for utilizing art in its purposed form.
You often incorporate a sort of song style with background singers through parenthesis, it's almost a traditional trait of yours so I appreciate that was put in here again. I like how you personified Time and Nature as well as the lines "fragile life turned broken glass." This poem is a story with beautiful structure and perspective that catches your gut and makes you think. Thanks, again, for sharing a piece of your mind with us.
that story gave me chills, it was really well written