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United States • 23 y/o • Male
The LORD is nigh unto all them that call upon him, to all that call upon him in truth. Psalm 145:18
I'd say this is pretty good. Also amazed by how many areas of writing you delved into.
This was really neat :) I like how you made the storytelling into like a staircase. One step at a time with each conflicting occurrence, it all came together.
I like the change up you put into your writing.
That was so cool. I liked that you made the wolf less intimidating than the rabbit. But now I don't really want a pet bunny. Hah :)
Interesting concept
that story gave me chills, it was really well written
that was perfectly written. the whole time i was thinking "oh my god, what does he look like". it was really good
i think we all need an angel to come and save us. preach.