Reviews Given
This was a pretty good story. Kinda strange for an American to read something like this being that the U.K has the passenger side on the left, and (from reading this) when you try get through an experience that was unsettling, you pour wine, where us Americans would crack open a cold beer.
The imagery was a new experience for me and that was awesome.
I wish that you had more interaction with or description of the ghost as to that it seems that it sort of just came and went with no reason to be in the vehicle. I know it was an accident that happened and the ghost had no reason to bring fear or vengeance towards people, but it seemed so bare and minimal with the ghost.
Overall though, great.
I thought life was all about sex, drugs, Rock n' Roll.
This was pretty good.
I like this whole astro-nature projection of imagery, if that is what you want to call it, for your world. I think I actually got lost in another dimension reading this. I'm just wonderin' what the "1:48am" title has to do with it? I'm guessing it was a dream that you've awaken from at the time or something along those lines, right?
Talk about self inflicting wounds of love. That just describes it there.
"Stick it to The Man!"- Dewey Finn (Jack Black); School of Rock
You do you, I'll do me and we'll both be happy individuals.
Alright.
This is totally classic horror right here. Reminds me of something that would be an episode of Night Gallery and Twilight Zone.
To have a dream and process through it as if it were real to then come to the conclusion that it may have actually happened.
An interesting concept for a story.
It reminds me of a classic horror film where a haunted castle (in this case, a shack) is high on the rocks in the sea mixed with Coraline vibes.
The comparisons of the abstract idea is amazing.
'Sharp tines scratching the black board', 'bug in a spider's web'- those are great connections .
You had me making all these connections and seeing what is happening, but then the ending came and it sort of threw me off the rails.
I believe if you took out, "She was gone" and then had "Never to return again" be the last phrase by itself for the ending, it would spark that emotion of one unique kind of love has vanished.
Overall, it was great.