United States • 22 y/oReviews Received
Very captivating idea. I liked realizing what was happening, and since this is a story about merpeople, it's inherently interesting.
3.5 stars. ;) I like the writing style, and I thought the concept was interesting. This would be a story that I'd enjoy getting to know a few more details of, like why he was stowing away and what happens after he transforms into a merperson.
Nice prose. Relatable.
This is a fun little snippet. It kind of seems like a writing prompt.
Good prose.
I like the rhetoric of this. And it's relatable.
