Skylar

I want more!

This hurts even more than Grief hurt me
Why must you do this

I love this! It's kind of simple, and kind of stated in a matter of fact way, but I think that helps emotion go through. It's really good!

What the heck, why do you insist on making me cry

Wow, this is really good! I hope to see more of your work!

Wow, this is really well written! I hope to see more from you in the future!

This is really, really good, as well as very true.