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There's a very fine line between love and hatred. I hope you have found or will find how to cross that line peacefully and love yourself in the end. Hatred is a very powerful emotion. Be careful.
This is beautiful. You really think about the constants in your life.
I really like some of your descriptions and the idea. I'm curious to know what comes next! Make sure you double check some of your spelling and your tenses.
This is beautiful. That's all I have to say.