Skyler Kapuschinsky

Good story with a good theme, however at times it was a little rushed which made it hard to read in certain parts. Other than that it was really good. I liked the purple wings, it shows a kid's imagination well.

I really enjoyed your story;?especially the plot began to thicken with the emotions of Billy and why he did what he did. Despite the story taking a dark turn I understand the message you were trying to get across.

Well Done!

That was an amazing pott. In the middle when the girls were killed i felt as if I was going to cry it has such a powerful way of putting it across. The message behind it is amazing.

That is so sad but still amazing. I love the storyline and how it all goes together and people do go through things like this so it's nice to see things like this to help others know what is happening. Amazing.

I still love this <3

so awesome!!!!!!

wow that was intense. so well written. I was not expecting any of that at all. this was amazing. keep up the good work!