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In my country, the United Kingdom, crash helmets for motorcyclists have been compulsory for decades. Then again laws in other countries may be different. If the scenario won't work today could you set it in the past? Countries that make helmets compulsory now may not always have done so. The twist would then be a good one.
So, while this may have some unique elements to it from the original, this is almost definitely not a poem your brother wrote himself. It was probably an assignment, or just something he thought was cool.
awwwww a German Shepherddd!!! That's one of the types of dogs I really want in the future! <3
and I have a kind of hate/love relationship with my younger siblings too o.o
as always, nice job! :D