Annielol399

I love this! It's kind of simple, and kind of stated in a matter of fact way, but I think that helps emotion go through. It's really good!

this is deep. and its like you just described me

Beautiful work of art in words

I like the use of bold words. It makes the emotions a little stronger.
Five stars

powerful

Strong, colorful words provide a raw powerful descriptions here............nice job.......