United States • 22 y/oReviews Given
Now that was satire!
Bonus points for the comedy.
I'll see what my little brother thinks of this one at bedtime.
Overall good writing but this isn't philosophy.
You could start by categorizing your work correctly. This isn't satire.
I like the way you think.
This is pretty good despite the grammatical errors.
No, go for it.
I see a couple of spacing errors as well as grammatical mistakes so the quality of this is poor but it's a decent story outside of those.