United Kingdom • 65 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Pretty good, but I propose use of the ';' in the beginning. What should've taken it's place was the '-', which would signal that the narrator was adding on a peice of information.
Nice work!
Well versed piece of ink
A very familiar story, I'm sure, for all dog owners. You captured one of the most pleasurable chores of dog ownership very well. :)
Through out life we all have adventures, at times they are romantic ones. Andy has done a stellar job on this story. Paul ugh, well read the story and you will see what I mean. Carol conjures up other feelings. I thought she might become famous, but....well I don't want to give it away so read it yourself.
Before I got to the ending I had many ideas of what would happen and I think you will too. Good job Apeman.
Wow! Great! If it were a little longer it would've felt more complete, but the irony and complications of the situations made it worth it.
Beautifully written
Great piece! Reminds me of a professor I had in college.
Even though I have never experienced bullying, I could deeply relate to this as the school I am in is for rich people and I am average, so I didn't really think I would fit in. Good use of words, but there could be a few deeper vocabulary. Good job!